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We are the movement
Small pebbles in the landslide
Mountains will collapse
©2009 ~0utdacious
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Constructive Criticism is thoroughly appreciated...

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:O I don't have anything to criticize, it's kinda awesome ><

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It's fine... ur stuff always is...

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Roach was here...
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.-. <-- i have been flipped upsidown! nice poem.. its cute :] and im sooo excited!!! 9 DAYSS!!! w000ttt!!! -does happy dance-

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Oh my 'effin god
It's the Jellemeno Beavers
I heard that 'effin song
On my radio receiver

Boing Boing Boing
when the jellemeno beavers are in the house
Boing Boing Boing
der'aint no wrong way to do the jellemeno bounce
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It is hard to criticize haiku, particularly when it is put together so well. :+fav:

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great, like the others said, it's hard to criticize haiku's, especially when it's just good:)

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